It may not seem like much to some, but for me, this was another achievement in the book that just keeps on giving. The Card received its 50th review, a 5 star review by Helen Gentile. Thank you, Helen, whoever your are!
Not to be outdone, a day later, BAM, #51 hit. It has amazed me that The Card, hitting #1 in three different categories on Amazon, continues to provide enjoyment for years. You never know going into this the shelf life of your novel. It's now been three years and it's still going strong.
The sequel, The Scorecard, is still in editing mode. While we had hoped to get it out by now, we realize now that it will be toward the middle to end of the summer. Hang tight. Life happens. However, we want to make sure its ready to go before we publish.
Showing posts with label reviews. Show all posts
Showing posts with label reviews. Show all posts
Wednesday, April 30, 2014
Thursday, June 13, 2013
New Reviews for The Card!
There's been a bunch of new reviews of THE CARD (A Van Stone Novel)
in the past couple of weeks!
Here's a few excerpts from readers of The Card:
Here's a few excerpts from readers of The Card:
Tuesday, April 30, 2013
New reviews for The Card - A Van Stone Novel
I'm pretty psyched about the most most recent reviews on Amazon. In the past few weeks, two 5 star reviews, one 4 star review and one 1 star review have appeared. Hey, I don't pull any punches, if someone doesn't like the book, that's their prerogative. You'll get a kick out of the one star.
Here they are straight from Amazon - The Card - A Van Stone Novel.
Here they are straight from Amazon - The Card - A Van Stone Novel.
Monday, March 26, 2012
Feedback on the ABNA from a fan!

Pasted directly from Goodreads
... by Moira:
I did not find myself distracted by cliches, and I definitely didn't
find the characters to be stereotypes, so in that sense I disagree with
the reviewers. I think you may have been hindered by the fact that they
only read an excerpt, because I think the character development,
particularly Van's discovery of his own internal strength, is the
strongest aspect of the book, though it may be more subtle. Regardless
of the outcome, congrats on your strong reviews and the consideration
for this award, not too shabby for your first book! I am really looking
forward to the sequel!
With fans like these, who needs contests? Thanks so much for your feedback Moira.
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Wednesday, March 21, 2012
Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Quarterfinals
My run in the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award is over.
Am I disappointed? Not really. I knew going in that the judging criteria for
this part was my weakest link.

“Amazon Expert
Reviewers” conducted the judging, which included one Amazon editor and one
Amazon “Expert” reviewer. The Amazon “Expert” Reviewer is a status achieved by
writing reviews for books listed on Amazon.
After reading the reviews, I was:
1) Really encouraged at the response
2) Wondering what it took to get into the
quarterfinals.
Monday, March 19, 2012
The Card at Cover Art Review
The cover art for The Card is posted for reviews and comments at the site, Cover Art Review.
Head over there to give your input on the work that Melissa Garcia-Devitt and Marsha Rollinger did in creating the first Van Stone Novel look.
Saturday, March 10, 2012
Have Others Promote Your Book - How to Get Reviews
Reviews are more
important than just getting feedback about your book. It’s common
knowledge that Amazon figures reviews in their ranking system. So the
more reviews you have, the better ranked your book could be.

Reviews
are one of the best methods to generate buzz about your book, without
you being the one shouting from the rooftops. We’ve all spent countless
conversations begging our friends and relatives to “post a review,
please!” It’s frustrating and many times, a fruitless endeavor. So, how
do we go about getting reviews?

First,
let me say NEVER PAY FOR A REVIEW. I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to shout.
Countless entities out there can’t wait to take your money. Don’t go
there. So, where do you go?
Book Blog Reviewers—your
best friend in the world. Book Bloggers love to read books and make
recommendations based on those books. Imagine reaching millions of
readers. They are not paid to do this, they do it for fun, which leads
to a timing drawback which I’ll address later. They can literally change
the success of your book and put you in the fast lane.
Here’s
how it works, once you’ve identified an appropriate book blogger, you
look under “submission requirements” or “review policy” and find out
what format they’ll take and what they are willing to review.
However, that doesn’t help us find them, does it? Here’s a little secret *looking side to side, whispering*
Bam,
there ya go. Click on that baby and away you go; type in your category,
and out pops thousands of book review sites that would be happy to
review your genre. Follow these few steps and you’ll be on your way:
1.
Research - take the time to find out that their site is interested in
your type of novel. They will spell it out for you in the policy
section.
2.
Don’t mass email them. Pick out something of note in each site that you
visit and comment on it in your email. They want to know that you
really looked at their site and are interested in their opinion. Use
their real name in the email, not the blog name.
3.
Be patient - I alluded to this above. Some of the more prestigious ones
that you run across may have a waiting list of months. Make sure you
are okay with this before you go through the trouble of asking for a
review. Most will spell this out in the “policy” section.
4. Be Polite - Don’t email them every week asking for your review. They’ll get to it and most will notify you when it’s posted.
Many will post to Amazon, Smashwords, Goodreads and B&N, not just on their blog site.
Here’s and example of an email that I wrote to a potential book blogger, feel free to copy it and use it for yourself:
Hi Chrystal,
I
am so glad that I found your blog. I love what you are doing for the
young adult population. It’s great to find someone that not only does
blog reviews, but does so with a real passion for books. It is apparent
that you love what you do. I have recently completed a first-in-a-series
Young Adult mystery/suspense novel. I’ve included a brief summary and
bio, and I would be honored if you would choose it for a review.
Thank you for your interest,
Jim (and then the synopsis and bio would follow which included a picture of the cover)
Once
they agree to review, get them the book in whatever format they
request. Of course, they do not promise a great review, just an honest
review. I have had wonderful experiences with book bloggers and consider
some of them friends now. Meanwhile, I’ve developed a database of
outlets for when my next novel comes out.
If
anyone would be interested, I would love to share my spreadsheet with
you that is comprised of over 100 different YA blog reviewers. Please
contact me in the comment section. One thing though, you will get it in the raw form, with all my notes and stuff.
Okay,
now for the super secret thing I found. Here’s the million dollar
take-away. Hopefully it’s new to you as well, otherwise, I’ll look like a
fool. There’s this site…
This
is a hidden treasure. Once you sign up, you can fill out a promotion
where you specify exactly who you want to review your book, genre, age
group, even left handed bloggers if you want. You can fine-tune it to
the number of Twitter and Facebook followers the reviewer has and even
specify an Alexa ranking. Once your “promotion” is approved, bloggers
COME TO YOU to review your book. You can choose who you want to send it
to and then you wait for your review, which you can specify when, one,
two or three weeks out. It is a gold mine for getting reviews. I’ve just
recently found out about this and have my first promotion under review
by the staff, waiting of it to go live. Imagine having 50 blog reviewers
contacting me to review my book. I know—Crazy!
Good
luck with both methods of review generation. As in any type of
promotion, it takes time. While you’re waiting for your reviews—KEEP
WRITING!
* * * * *
Jim Devitt
is a Contributing Author for Indies Unlimited. The author of the #1
Kindle Bestselling novel, THE CARD, has recently moved on to the second
round in the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award competition. A version of this post appeared at Indies Unlimited on March 3, 2012
Tuesday, February 28, 2012
Finding books for younger teens - How do Parents find age appropriate novels
I
write Teen and Young Adult novels. That poses an interesting problem. At what
age do kids have carte blanche access to the traditional (funny—traditional— in
a new world of eBooks) methods of getting the word out about books for teens
and YA. Obviously, the upper end of that age range is not an issue. Older
teenagers can and will download books all day long.

With
this in mind, I looked into what was available out in the cyber world. There’s
no better place to start than a fantastic site that reviewed THE CARD, way back
in the beginning.
The mission at BookDads.com is to highlight books,
which show fatherhood in a positive light. Some of the content they bring to
you includes:
* Author
spotlights and interviews
* Advice and
resources for dads to help promote reading to their children
* Parenting
resources for dads
* Book
reviews
The premiere site for parents of twins. A
great resource for just about everything associated with having twins.
Articles, giveaways and an unbelievable support group of other parents with
twins. One of the most active portions of their site is the forum, which
contains a constant and ever-changing discussion of all things twins.
The nation’s leading independent nonprofit
advocating for kids. This site is dedicated to improving the lives of kids and
families by providing trustworthy information and education. They review all
things media—books, movies, video games and more. The also offer resources for
understanding your children and what they are going through at all ages. An
excellent and vital resource to understanding your kid and what the media world
means to him.
This number one global community of reviewers
connects Moms and Dads who enjoy reviewing cool products. The site is chock
full of reviews on books, gifts, merchandise, food and tons of giveaways.
These are just a few of the tip sites that
help busy parents understand what’s appropriate for their children. Our kids
are growing at light speed and it is very difficult to know about every new
fad, gadget, or social media site that hits the mainstream every day.
With a little help from these folks, you
should have an easier time finding age appropriate material to help stimulate
your child’s love for reading, writing and learning.
If you know of other sites that you would like to mention, please leave them in the comments section for others to see.
Tuesday, July 5, 2011
All the reviews in one place, including the Seattle PI's
I've updated the review page to include all reviews up through today. The total now is 10 five star, 6 four star and 1 three star reviews. The reviews have been retrieved from Amazon, Goodreads, Shelfari, and of course the Seattle PI.
Just click the link on the sidebar..."See what others are saying about The Card"
Thanks everyone.
Just click the link on the sidebar..."See what others are saying about The Card"
Thanks everyone.
Thursday, June 9, 2011
We've hit the big-time...Seattle PI posts review of The Card!!
This is huge everyone! The Seattle PI just published a review of The Card. The Seattle online newspaper published critic Leslie Wright's review today. Check out their review here.
Here's an exert from the review "...I would recommend this book for the young adult reader; it is fun and eventful, with suspense and action. Van Stone is a strong character, and has an amazing way of dealing with life. Devitt provides some great ballpark background as he delivers the goods..."
Thanks to everyone for their continued support, this is an incredible journey!
Here's an exert from the review "...I would recommend this book for the young adult reader; it is fun and eventful, with suspense and action. Van Stone is a strong character, and has an amazing way of dealing with life. Devitt provides some great ballpark background as he delivers the goods..."
Thanks to everyone for their continued support, this is an incredible journey!
Monday, June 6, 2011
Another review roles in... 4 out of 5 stars
More good news for The Card! Sandie Kirkland who reviews for Booksie's Blog, Curled up With a Good Book, Rebecca's Reads, Book Pleasures and Book Blogs, posted the most recent review on her site and on Amazon.
Be careful though, if you want to keep the Van Stone novel a surprise, there is a spoiler alert for the review.
Thanks again to Sandie for all of the support!
Be careful though, if you want to keep the Van Stone novel a surprise, there is a spoiler alert for the review.
Thanks again to Sandie for all of the support!
Sunday, May 29, 2011
Confessions of a YA Writer review of The Card
Check out the latest review to post for The Card. Rebecca at Confessions of a YA Writer blog, posted the review on her site and on Goodreads. A special thanks to Rebecca for taking the time to read and review the first in a series Van Stone Novel.
I hope everyone enjoys their Memorial Day Weekend and let's not forget those who help us live the freedoms that we enjoy every day.
I hope everyone enjoys their Memorial Day Weekend and let's not forget those who help us live the freedoms that we enjoy every day.
Friday, May 13, 2011
More reviews coming in ...
Check out the latest review of The Card to hit, from Blogger Rita Reviews at http://www.ritareviews.blogspot.com/. More positive comments!
One thing that is absolutely clear. I had better get the next book in the series finished! More and more people are asking for the sequel.
Click on Rita Reviews and see for yourself what she had to say!
Here is an exert...
"...Mr. Devitt has done a great job of keeping us on the edges of our seats...As this is Volume 1, we can't wait for the next in the series."
One thing that is absolutely clear. I had better get the next book in the series finished! More and more people are asking for the sequel.
Click on Rita Reviews and see for yourself what she had to say!
Here is an exert...
"...Mr. Devitt has done a great job of keeping us on the edges of our seats...As this is Volume 1, we can't wait for the next in the series."
Saturday, April 23, 2011
BookDads.com Review is in...and it's a Hit!
Please check out BookDads for the latest review of The Card. There's a spoiler alert in the review because of the emotional nature of some of the events. Here is an exert of the review by Chris Singer:
...The Card is a fast-paced, entertaining action-adventure story both fathers and sons can read and enjoy together...
... All in all, a terrific first effort by Jim Devitt. The Card is the first of what looks like a series of Van Stone novels. I’m really looking forward to seeing where the author is going to take this series. I’m especially interested in seeing if there is further development around some of the themes discussed above. I think many other readers will be looking forward to this as well...
Book Dads mission is to highlight books which show fatherhood in a positive light. Some of the content they hope to bring to you includes:
* Book reviews
* Author spotlights and interviews
* Advice and resources for dads to help promote reading to their children
* Parenting resources for dads
Tuesday, April 19, 2011
Upcoming Reviews for THE CARD
Lots of activity brewing with The Card! Please take a look at some of the great blogs that are helping to support the release of our new Van Stone novel.
Look for a review at the end of the week on Books Dads, a great blog who's mission is to highlight books which show fatherhood in a positive light.
The site includes book reviews, advice and resources for dads to help promote reading to their children and parenting resources for dads.
As you can imagine, I am honored to be a part of their mission and I hope that many dad's and kids out there can benefit not only from The Card, but from the resources on their site.
Stimulated Outlet Book Reviews has received The Card for review and you can see it posted on their site currently. SOBR conducts reviews that are broken into five categories: Overall, plot, originality,language and believability. Her reviews are a no-holds-barred analysis of the writing and the overall story. I look forward to seeing her upcoming critique.
Tuesday, April 12, 2011
Book Bloggers
Many people have been discussing book bloggers and ways to market themselves out in the blogosphere. For those who have ended up here looking for a solution, I will direct you to a recent blog about this topic.
The Book Deal, The Inside View of Publishing performs an in-depth analysis of this topic with some very helpful hints. Just as important, the comment string gives you additional insight as to what others are doing and how blog reviewers perceived the article.
There is no question that book review bloggers play an important role in the promotion of self published and traditionally published authors!
To give you an idea, in the coming months the following sites have either completed a review or agreed to review THE CARD:
Full Moon Bites
Book Dads
Kristi's Book Nook
Mystic Thoughts
Two Kids and Tired Book Reviews
Bloggin about Books
Welcome to My Life
Two ends of the Pen
Tic Toc
The Book Tree
A Soul Unsung
Stimulated Outlook Book Reviews
Silvers Reviews
Rita Reviews
That is all that is lined up right now, with more coming online everyday. One of the advantages of blog reviewers is that most will post their reviews on their own blog, Amazon, Goodreads and just about any other place you request (Barnes and Noble, etc.)
It is a win-win for everyone involved.
The Book Deal, The Inside View of Publishing performs an in-depth analysis of this topic with some very helpful hints. Just as important, the comment string gives you additional insight as to what others are doing and how blog reviewers perceived the article.
There is no question that book review bloggers play an important role in the promotion of self published and traditionally published authors!
To give you an idea, in the coming months the following sites have either completed a review or agreed to review THE CARD:
Book Dads
Kristi's Book Nook
Mystic Thoughts
Two Kids and Tired Book Reviews
Bloggin about Books
Welcome to My Life
Two ends of the Pen
Tic Toc
The Book Tree
A Soul Unsung
Stimulated Outlook Book Reviews
Silvers Reviews
Rita Reviews
That is all that is lined up right now, with more coming online everyday. One of the advantages of blog reviewers is that most will post their reviews on their own blog, Amazon, Goodreads and just about any other place you request (Barnes and Noble, etc.)
It is a win-win for everyone involved.
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